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Mouse-Dawn .:TODD Application:. by vivikitty473 Mouse-Dawn .:TODD Application:. by vivikitty473
Finally updated the pic XD
Tomorrow ill do Smally...maybe.

{Edits:} -I added two more moons to her age since it's been four weeks since she was made
- she is now more fluffier than before :3
- many of her opinions have been added/changed
- I changed her 'short temper' to 'prideful' since its her pride that makes her easily angered X3

Paw Bullet (Dark Brown) - F2U! {General} Paw Bullet (Dark Brown) - F2U! 

Full name: Mouse-Dawn

Age: 10 Moons

Gender: Female

Rank: To-Be

Mate: (*Blush*) Well...I kinda dream of a tom who loves me and all my weirdness...I want to know him-all his faults and wonders...what I want, is someone who'll never leave my side, weather im sick, ugly or old.

Paw Bullet (Blue) - F2U! {Personality} Paw Bullet (Blue) - F2U! 

:bulletgreen:Optimistic :bulletgreen:
"Dont you worry guys! Im sure things will get better!"

Mouse-Dawn is incredibly optimistic. Its never half empty, always half full with her. She hates to see cats losing hope, and will try her hardest to bring it back. Mouse-Dawn always looks for the brighter side of things, and helps anyone she can to see things the way she does. She belives that the more hope there is, the better the situation will become.

:bulletred:Stubborn :bulletred:
"Hey! If I said it'll work-Then it'll work!"

One of her bad trait would involve her overly stubborn nature. She refuses to have someone change her mind, and will usually go into an all-out war with whoever tries to change her ideas. However, if you come at her slowly and skillfully with the right words, she may listen to what you have to say, but it'll take a while to admit she's wrong. 

:bulletgreen:Kind :bulletgreen:
"Look, I didnt mean to be sorry..."

Even though she'll never admit she's wrong, she never likes to hurt someone's feelings or have them mad at her, so after her temper-tantrum is done, she'll usually go up to the cat and apologize, then hear them out. She likes working with others, and tries her best to think about other's feelings when she's making her own battle plans. She is surprisingly highly perspective, and can easily figure out what someone is feeling by their body-language. She hates seeing cats bullied or suffering, and she'll usually try her hardest to break someone's shell, but will never result to being a nuisance in doing so. Patience is always the key.

:bulletred:Prideful :bulletred:
"Im not hurt! Leave me alone!"

Even roses have thorns, and the sharpest thorn on Mouse-Dawn is her pridefulness. She doesn't like depending on cats, and will usually lie or squeeze the truth so no one worries about her or think she'd weak. This is bad because her pride prevents her from getting checked up, and will usually lead her to her own demise. The worst part is that her pride makes her short tempered, and thus resulting in her having a sharp tongue whenever angered.

 Paw Print (Red) - F2U! R a n d o m   F a c t s Paw Print (Red) - F2U! 

:bulletred:= This is an import secret to Mousey, and only those she trusts and is close to know about it. 

- She refuses to have a mate due to a promise she made with a friend.
- Gets easily hot due to long coat and tires easy
-never likes to admit to her fears or pains because she doesn't want anyone to worry
-thinks shy toms are just adorable
-tries her best to befriends everyone, no matter how difficult
-crazy dreams
-rarely gets any sleep due to the heat
:bulletred: -slightly claustrophobic
:bulletred: -has a minor case of Emetophobia (phobia of getting sick) due to both her parents dieing of sickness. 

Paw Bullet (Purple) - F2U! {Family}  Paw Bullet (Purple) - F2U!

Currently none alive

Paw Bullet Orange (Outline) - F2U! {History} Paw Bullet Orange (Outline) - F2U! 

Mouse-Dawn was born in a fairly colder time, resulting in her medium-long coat. Her mother and her father both cared for her more than enough. Mouse-Dawn was the only surviving kit in her litter, and usually played by herself. However, that didnt stop her from growing a big heart in her parent's soft care. Her Father showed her how to be strong and brave, while her mother kept her kind and humble. Much like her parents, Mouse-Dawn was optimistic since birth, and never once prayed to their ancestors due to her believing they didnt need divine powers to save them from minor sickness. Mouse-Dawn was over joyed when her mother gave birth to her baby brother, Roaring-Dawn. Sadly though, her ancestors nor her optimism helped heal her mother when she was attacked by an eagle, and she soon died of the infections and sickness caused by it. Distraught, Mouse-Dawn turned to her father for counseling, but in his depression, he completely shut out everyone, including his daughter and son. Mouse-Dawn practically shut down and became a different cat. She grew more hostile, and had abandoned all faith in the stars as well as the hope that things could get better. She also hated her father, for leaving her to cry alone, though she stood beside him as he took his last breath, dyeing from sickness caused by his depression and starving himself. Over time, however, as she became a to-be and grew out of her kitten childishness, and with the help of her cheerful brother, she returned to her usual happy self, though part of her misses her mother and, slightly, her father. She returned to believing in her ancestors, but refuses to think they could do anything to help. After all. They're all dead.


Paw Bullet (Pink) - F2U! {Relationships} Paw Bullet (Pink) - F2U! 

Bullet; White ll Don't Know well... 
Bullet; WhiteBullet; White ll Kinda A Friend 

Bullet; Green ll Likes 
Bullet; GreenBullet; Green ll Friends 
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green ll Good Friends 

Bullet; Blue ll Ex-Crush 
Bullet; BlueBullet; Blue ll Pity For 
Bullet; BlueBullet; BlueBullet; Blue ll Ex-Mate 

Bullet; Purple ll practically family // Platonic Love
Bullet; PurpleBullet; Purple ll Family
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleBullet; Purple ll Would die to protect

Bullet; Pink ll Slight Crush 
Bullet; PinkBullet; Pink ll Average Crush 
Bullet; PinkBullet; PinkBullet; Pink ll Major Crush 

Bullet; Yellow ll Suspicious // slight fear
Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow ll Questionable // uncertain
Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellowll Eager to know About 

Bullet; Red ll Lust 
Bullet; RedBullet; Red ll Love 
Bullet; RedBullet; RedBullet; Red ll Would die without
Bullet; Orange ll Admires 
Bullet; OrangeBullet; Orange ll Respect
Bullet; OrangeBullet; OrangeBullet; Orange ll Fear

Bullet; Black ll  Annoyance
Bullet; BlackBullet; Black ll Slight Hatred
Bullet; BlackBullet; BlackBullet; Black ll Wants dead/prepared to kill

Rose ll Mate

Death ll Dead

|Bullet; White|Bullet; Green|Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow|Bullet; OrangeBullet; Orange | Raven-Mud: 

"Shes really grumpy and kinda rude, but I know she has a good heart inside! I see a lot of cats judge her before they know her...but to me, she's one of the best mentors ive ever had!"

|Bullet; White|Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow| Pebble-Mud

"I...I dont know what feel terrible that I cant help her...Although her theories about Starteller kinda...kinda scare me...I just hope she gets out of her depression..."

|Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green |Bullet; Purple| Burning-Glare

"She annoying, bossy, dumb~like the sister ive always wanted (sorry Roaring!) She's really an awesome cat and amazing Messenger To-be! I hope to always be able to tease her about her giggles!"

|Bullet; GreenBullet; Green|Bullet; Purple| Crow-Sun

"She has such a bad reputation, and I cant blame them, she tends to be very rude and snobby-but she's pretty cool once you get to know her-and boy can she fly on that geyser! I like hanging out with her, and I dont regret saying she's my sister! Call me Mouse-sun now *giggle*"

|Bullet; GreenBullet; Green|Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow| Birch-Adder

"He's pretty sweet, if not shy. I hope to get to know him better and break his shell"

|Bullet; GreenBullet; Green|Bullet; Purple/Bullet; RedBullet; Red (?)|Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow| Falcon-Crag

"He's really nice and caring, and I love being his friend...but he wants to be more than that...I care about him, wholely and truly but...I dont know if my feelings towards him is love...Id hate to break his heart...
Edit: I dont know if he and I will ever be friends the same way we were back then...But, I promise...if you have to suffer-then I will too. Ill never take a mate. Not until your as happy as me.
Edit2: I dont know what to make of my feelings for him...I love him-I do! I just...I just dont know...I dont want him to leave me...I dont want to lose my friend...I promised him I'd be his mate if he took time away from me but...but...I just dont know what will happen...Falcon...I wish he never fell in love with me...maybe then he wouldn't hurt so much..."

|Bullet; GreenBullet; Green|Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow| Cloudy-Peak

"He's so clumsy and funny *giggle* I love the time I spend with him trying to egt him to walk straight-hehe. Keep up the practice Cloudy!"

|Bullet; Orange|Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow|Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green| Alder-Rise

"He's really nice...and kind...and I love knowing I make him purr...I dont know why...but he makes me feel warm and happy...Is this what it feels like to have a big brother? Hmm...but it feels...sweeter than that...I dont know what it is, but I never want to leave his side...
Edit:I told him a nightmare I had and I just...I just feel so warm and happy...But...this isn't what Pebble described love was....

|Bullet; White|Bullet; BlackBullet; Black | Tidal-Rise

"I dont know him very well...but I dont like him. I hate how Aldy feels so inferior to his brother when Tidal is a JERK! I swear-if he ever hurts Alder-Rise again ill...ill...ill..."

The heat, as usual, was the reason Mouse-Dawn was woken from her pleasant nap. Blinking open tired grey eyes. Mouse-Dawn yawned, lifting her head and glancing around. It took the tired apprentice a few moments to fully wake, and even then it didn't help the heaviness in her muscles as she sat up and headed for the den entrance, yawning her jaws wide. It was never fun having an overly long coat near a lava stream, and it hurt not being able to sleep for very long in the heat-but hey, what could you do? Shaking out her shaggy pelt as she walked, Mouse didnt bother to groom herself as she sat down by the camp entrance, letting out another yawn, she rubbed her eyes, glancing around at the clearing.

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AwkwardlyAlive Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
how old is she going to be with this new update do you know?
vivikitty473 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nothing much changing xD
I might move her to the other tribe though...
AwkwardlyAlive Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor little Falcon bae
vivikitty473 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know..*huggle*
Mouse is just so upset, she hopes a change of scenery will help her

Although, yes, she might change a little...
Roaring died...
AwkwardlyAlive Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ah that sucks
also the whole falcon bombshell wont help
im not sure what im gonna do with him at this point
i dont know if i should kill him leave him move him idk
vivikitty473 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah ;;
Well-you gave him cancer...either way, he's going to die x'D
AwkwardlyAlive Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
We need to rp these sweet hearts again
vivikitty473 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im so sooorrry!!!
Im so lazy-I should have started the RP a crud-long-time ago! ;A;
Ill see if I can send you a note now or...around this week...;w;
AwkwardlyAlive Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
its alright!
just do it when you can
vivikitty473 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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